Exiled by M.R. Merrick

ExiledExiled by M.R. Merrick
Series: The Protector #1
Published by: Self Published on June 28, 2011
Genre: Fantasy, Paranormal, Urban Fantasy
Pages: 286
Source: Gifted
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Rating: ★★★★

Chase Williams is a demon hunter in the Circle, or at least he was supposed to be. On his fifteenth birthday, Chase stepped up to the altar to claim his elemental power, but it never came. Elemental magic is passed down to a hunter through the bloodline, but on Chase's birthday, the bloodline stopped.

Exiled without the Circle's protection, Chase has spent two years trying to survive a world riddled with half-demons and magic. When he has a run in with a frightened and seemingly innocent demon, he learns the Circle's agenda has changed: the Circle plans to unlock a portal and unleash pure-blood demons into the world. Vowing to stop them, and knowing he can't do it alone, Chase forms a reluctant alliance with Rayna — a sexy witch with an attitude and a secret.

In their attempt to stop them, Chase and Rayna find themselves in the middle of the Circle's plan, leaving one of them to decide what their friendship is worth, and the other's life depending on it.

First, I’d like to Brenna from Esther’s Ever After for gifting me a copy of this book! She is such a sweetheart! I had my eye on this series for a while now but just wasn’t able to buy my own copy. So thank you Brenna, you’re amazing!

Fans of Cassandra Clare’s The Mortal Instruments series will love this book! I’ve actually only read City of Bones so far, but there are a lot of similarities in style between that book and Exiled. I actually liked Exiles more than city of bones. 😀 So if you like Cassandra Clare, definitely check out Exiled!

Exiled is a super awesome story about demons, demon hunters, vampires, warlocks, trolls, and more! This is exactly the kind of story I like: magical powers, secret world/society that humans don’t know about, corrupt organization, and war! Chase Williams—a demon hunter—is the main character in this story. He’s part of an organization called The Circle, the purpose of which is to protect the world from demons. On his fifteenth birthday, he steps up to claim his elemental power, which is passed down through demon hunter bloodlines, but it doesn’t come. Since he’s now labeled ‘powerless,’ The Circle decides to exile him and his mother. And awesome, unexpected adventures ensue!

I loved Chase’s character because he actually reminded me a lot of myself, and as a girl, I don’t usually relate that well to male characters. But I definitely saw a lot of myself in Chase and that was a pleasant surprise for me. He’s loyal, determined, a little too stubborn, doesn’t like to admit when he’s wrong, and often gets a little overpowered by guilt. He’s fiercely loyal to his friends so he hates it when his friends are put in danger because of his actions.

Rayna was also a terrific character! She’s sexy, badass, super smart, and talented. Rayna is half half-demon and half hunter, and possibly one of a kind. She has so many interesting and unique powers, that even she is still discovering. Plus she has cat eyes — that’s awesome.

There was a really interesting almost-romance brewing between Chase and Rayna. They start off kind of hating each other, but soon their jibes start straying away from dislike and towards the kind of playful banter that happens when flirting. Nothing ever officially develops between them, but the tension and chemistry are there, so I really hope this is something we see more of in book 2!

What’s great about Exiled is that it’s so full of action and there is never a dull moment. Chase is constantly being attacked by demons, striking deals with vampires, or going on some adventure to discover the truth or rescue his friends. There are plenty of battle scenes, some of which are a little gory, but they’re all described in wonderful detail and clarity. M.R. Merrick introduces us to a wide variety of characters and creatures, from goblins to trolls to shifters. At one point, Chase acquires an animal companion he names Rai. This is the most awesome bird ever and I totally want one! But she doesn’t get introduced until near the end of the story, so I won’t reveal too much about her awesomeness. 😛

Speaking of the end, it’s really quite sad and totally had me tearing up, which was a little embarrassing since I was at an airport. 😀 But this is definitely an intriguing story that any magic lover or urban fantasy addict will enjoy! There are so many awesome characters, intriguing lore, and new worlds to learn about. Merrick really excelled at creating interesting characters with interesting and unique personalities. Each one had a very distinctive voice and I fell in love with all of them for different reasons.

Exiled is a self published book, but you’d never know it. Many people are turned off by self published books — and I often am too — but I really hope that doesn’t dissuade you from picking up Exiled. During my reading, there was never a time where I was thinking, “This is a great story but it could really use some editing.” The story flows well, the characters are interesting and develop, and I didn’t encounter the spelling/grammatical errors that are often present in self published works. Exiled is a great book and I can’t wait to read the second one in the series!

As for my rating, I was constantly going back and forth between 4 stars and 5 stars — I couldn’t really decide. So let’s go with 4.5 😛

The Verdict


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  1. Never heard of this book, but! you totally sold me! I love such a rich blend of mystical creatures and … yes I am a big fan of Cassie Clare’s book, so this one sounds like a book for me!!

    Just like you, I’m sad that people turn down books because they are self-pub. There are some serious jewels out there! I think the main problem is how to distinguish them… and I am often just annoyed by the way I am contacted, which is why I don’t bother to look twice into their book! Anyways! This sound awesome:))

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    1. Yay I’m so glad you’re intrigued! This book perfectly illustrates the world I always wish existed, haha. You know, the kind of secret world inside ours that we silly mortals are oblivious too.

      I think the main thing Merrick has going for him in terms of being self-published is that he doesn’t halfass anything. Some self-pub authors will write a great story but then skimp on the cover and the promoting. Or some have a great idea but skimp on the character development. But Merrick goes all out. I think his covers are awesome (I think he designs them himself too!), his storytelling is great, and the word building and characters are all awesome too! I just totally commend him for going all out and making his books the best they can be in every way possible.

      I’m off to start the second book! ^_^

  2. This book seems like it’s right up my alley. Demons and male protagonists and stuff? Hell yeah! I can’t wait to get around to this series—especially after this review haha.

    I wasn’t a fan of City of Bones once the “glamour” of it wore off (I had to look past the cool tattoos and the golden whip to realize what I was reading), so the comparison kinda put me off. But! I know that at the heart of TMI series was the stuff I loved—demons, demon hunters, vampires, angels, LGBT (what little there was), weapons, you know, things of that nature. So, in that sense, I can appreciate a comparison. Woohoo~.

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    1. Well I personally actually liked Exiled *more* than City of Bones, so I guess that’s a good thing! 🙂

      I do hope you get a chance to pick it up, and if you do, I’d love to see your review!

  3. LOL my older sister waekld by the exact moment I scrolled down to see his picture, and I swear she almost swooned off her feet! x) Even I have to admit that he’s hot! And that’s so cool! She’s a witch, a hunter, and has the eyes of a shifter? That’d be such an amazing combo of powers! I definitely need to pick up this book! 🙂

  4. An awesome review Ashley! I’m a big fan of this series, it just gets better and better. I too love the characters & was saddened by the ending.

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